2013年5月26日 星期日

Problems & Advice

Advice: I think you can post more details about the picture on the right.
Response: Ok, I’ll add another sentence to describe it.

A: Revise your lead, it’s too boring, you need to catch the readers’ eyes first.
R: Agree. I’ll try to make it more interesting.

A: You don’t have to put the picture’s link under the explanation of your picture; you can put it at the end of the article.
R: I’ll think about it.

A: Paragraph 7 is a little confusing; maybe you can add some examples in it. (What if readers didn’t see your video!!?)
R: Ok, I’ll revise it.


項目
評分
Interesting lead / Headline / Summary
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Who / When / What / Where / How
其他調查資源 (圖片、連結、影片等)
特殊的觀點(angle)
文章張力
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humorous ending
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內容有趣度﹝程度評分1-5
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